Tchotchkes

This is so cute, I love how each item tells its own unique story and its easy to envision yourself as the owner of each item! I wonder if you could possibly get different "endings" based off the items you have in hand in the future, I feel like that would be a neat way to utilize the inventory mechanic! Great job so far and wonderful writing

ohhhh this is so nice and personal :) I also love the way you designed the game page?! I can't wait to see how the finished art will look with the web design!!
similar to sam, I think my biggest issue was the speed of text, or maybe the way the text was broken up? it felt like there was a lot of text and it was a bit slow to appear. I can't wait to see the direction you take this in!!

The story is super cute and I love the personal touches :] It's gonna look so cool with your added art!!! I don't have many critiques at this current stage, but maybe experiment with the text speed, possibly a tiny bit faster? (this might just be a me thing) and maybe if you add more objects make the stories a bit more varied. I really enjoyed the monchichi story in particular! Loving this :D - Sam